Recall this is a vigil, not a fight
A quiet hand demands a quiet mind
Don't think about tomorrow; you'll be right.
Protect my puzzling soul and keep it white
For under judgement it would fall apart
Recall this is a vigil, not a fight
I'm sure that if you look back on this night
Your sightless messangers will see a waste
Don't think about tomorrow; you'll be right.
Devotion of my spirit's at its height
(I told you I was bad at proving love)
Recall this is a vigil, not a fight
And leaving you is not a callous flight
But longing separates - I've seen it done.
Don't think about tomorrow; you'll be right.
In torturous empathy, I know your plight
I know the sadness tembling in this calm
Recall this is a vigil, not a fight
I'm called away to flourish as I might
I will come back if you forget I'm gone
Don't think about tomorrow; you'll be right.
Excitement for the sunrise is not spite,
But hopes for all my mind I may ignite
Recall this is a vigil, not a fight
Don't think about tomorrow; you'll be right.
©2007-2009 =darkdescartes
Details
Submitted: February 18, 2007
File Size: 1.3 KB
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 14
Favourites & Collections: 5 [who?]
Views
Total: 75
Today: 0
Downloads
Total: 0
Today: 0
Thumb
Submitted: February 18, 2007
File Size: 1.3 KB
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 14
Favourites & Collections: 5 [who?]
Views
Total: 75
Today: 0
Downloads
Total: 0
Today: 0
Thumb
Author's Comments
A villanelle about the night before two lovers have to part (I'm spending all of my summer in Rhode Island for Summer@Brown, Maine to see my family, and all over the place for softball tournaments, and won't see him for nine weeks - this is I'm sure what our farewell will be like)
Sightless messengers = neurotransmitters (or hormones?)
Sightless messengers = neurotransmitters (or hormones?)
Report a Policy Violation
Site Map
Community News132 Text Art: Anatomy, Basics, Effects^Sander-Seto
 reports, 1d 7h agoAn interesting Text Art News Article about the Anatomy of Type, Basics and some Effects. I'm sure you'll learn from it! 86 Support the Sara Baker Trust Fund!=SenshiStock
 reports, 10h 33m agoA new round of fund raising for a fellow deviant in need of your help. 72 People who's Fractals SUCKED !!!=Fiery-Fire
 reports, 1d 19h agoNo Fractals or Fractal Artists were harmed during the making of this News !!!  69 .Square Photographs.~KarinLouise
 reports, 1d 11h ago A collection of the most beautiful and amazing square photographs I found among my favourites. Please have a look and give these artists the attention they deserve! 66 Daily Literature Deviations - July 17, 2009*DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 20h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 10 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community. |
PollAre you currently in school? |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,267 days.
Only 20 days until our ninth birthday!
|
Deviousness
When it comes to community spirit, `Rushy is a shining example. From participating in devmeets, to providing positive encouragement to other artists, `Rushy can always be found demonstrating what it really takes to be a true deviant. It's without any hesitation that we are delighted to award the Deviousness Award for July 2009 to `Rushy Read More
|
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
Devious Comments
Comments
--
--
clinging to the pendulum of emotions that's life.
heheh .. be this far from what you were going or close, i quite enjoyed the double story it played in my head.
--
Just, walk away .. and-
--
Me? Underweight? Naaaah...
I less-than-three DA soooo much!
--
Me? Underweight? Naaaah...
I less-than-three DA soooo much!
--
Me? Underweight? Naaaah...
I less-than-three DA soooo much!
--
clinging to the pendulum of emotions that's life.
--
Just, walk away .. and-
I love the way you utilize this phrase... it's repeated in just the right manner at the right times and gives this some cadence. Great work.
--
Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia.
~ E.L. Doctorow
Whenever you think your life is over, you have to realize that's the signal that a new era is beginning.
- =Snow-Machine
Previous Page12Next Page